Essay coherence is all about are you going in the same line of thought are you showing a contrast so you go in a different way are you reversing course are you adding are you basically showing consequence all kinds of things you’re going to be using for this conjunctions while when after even though because all of these things they add basically a relationship between one idea and the next within the sentence and even sentence to sentence okay syntax syntax is a little bit tricky this is a bit for the more advanced writers how you arrange your words will make a difference in terms of meaning sometimes but also in terms of tone in terms of the things you want to emphasize or the things you want to tone down etc. how you place the words makes a difference okay. Get to know how to do prepositions right on Robotdon.
You’re the prepositions you use prepositions are very good tools among which so basically you’re showing something here and then among which so inside this are more detailed things to look consider pronouns use pronouns a lot of the writers I see on these tests especially don’t use enough pronouns they repeat the item or the subject or the noun many times instead of using pronouns in their place so these are all the tools that you need to study you can go to my site right to top calm and you can see all these things individually and get example see how to use them etc now the function the function of cohesion is to make relationships evident and clear it must be very clear to the reader why you put this idea and this idea next to each other if there’s no link between them then I don’t really know why you place them together and maybe I don’t understand the second one because it has no relationship to the first one we’re going to see examples you’ll understand what I’m talking about soon enough here’s your first example.
While it is evident that these policies have not had the desired effect they have nevertheless led to certain unexpected positive results among these is the increase in so what are some things we’re looking at while I have a conjunction right away you know there’s going to be a contrast somewhere while it is evident that these policies have not had the desired effect so I know it’s they don’t by the way we look at it these things didn’t do what they’re meant to do with the original idea of the policy didn’t happen but we had while which means there’s a contrast coming they have nevertheless so I understand that they didn’t do what they were supposed to but they led to certain unexpected positive results so yeah they didn’t do what they were meant to but what they did do is still a good thing okay so I have a contrast and I’m focusing on the positive results among these among these results these positive results is the increase in.